tanglenose
Junior Camper
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MY BOY!
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Post by tanglenose on Apr 11, 2010 20:41:58 GMT -5
Name ~ Bryan Hollins
Parent's name ~ Graham Hollins and Iris Gender ~ Male Age ~ 15 Determined? ~ No One power from the store for your god parent ~ Can displace small amounts of water {i.e. Average water bottle} Appearance ~ Bryan usually wears black shirts with blue jeans and black sneakers. He has short brown hair and soft green eyes. He is far stronger than most people would guess. Wears glasses and is frequently biting his nails. He has several freckles and a scar on his forearm. Personality ~ Bryan is nice and loving but doesn't like to bother anyone. If he does something wrong, he automaticly feels bad about it, even if it was an aciddent. He his uncomfortable around people he doesn't know. He has ADD and frequently wanders and fidgets. Extreamly random and funny. Loves the rain, despises the sun. If he could make it so it always rain, he probably would. Not really the 'bad-ass' type. History ~ Bryan was raised beleving his fake mother and father were his parents, even though they wern't married. Always felt like he didn't belong and was ment for something more than a normal, boring life. Practices swordplay and archery with his best friend. Likes reading and swimming.
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Comments/Other ~ Needs someone to take him to Camp Half-Blood.
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Post by ♫iSilk♫ on Apr 11, 2010 20:50:00 GMT -5
It's really short; could you add some?
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tanglenose
Junior Camper
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MY BOY!
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Post by tanglenose on Apr 11, 2010 22:32:31 GMT -5
Ok, I added some more.
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Post by Froggie! on Apr 12, 2010 16:57:16 GMT -5
Could you add another sentence or two to each one? They're still really short.
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tanglenose
Junior Camper
[M:-44]
MY BOY!
Posts: 257
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Post by tanglenose on Apr 13, 2010 20:00:52 GMT -5
It has been done. Sorry, I suck at bios
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Post by Froggie! on Apr 13, 2010 22:55:37 GMT -5
No problem, a good point is three full lines which you have. Accepted.
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